Question

prosze o poprawienie opisu wakacjii prosze szybko pilne

my holidays i spent in house sometimes i went with my family to forest and we pick up blueberries. i often sunbathing and swimming in my swimingpool with my friends. always i help my mother cleaned house and sometimes washed a car. often all my family organised barbecue for friends and we had gret fun because we dancing singing eating drinking.i ride on bicycle or ride a rollers with my friends often . i spent a little time with my cousins natalia who go to me with zielona góra and we spent crazy time.my all holidays was fantastic but the time was to fast and i must go to school

Answer 1

we picked up (musisz mieć czas przeszly)

i was often sunbathing

we had great fun (mozeli literowke zrobilas/es)

we were dancing...

cousin (bez "s" bo z 1 kuzynka)

who went to me (znowu czas przeszly!)

from zielona gora (nie moze byc "with")

i had to go to school ( forma przeszla od "must" to "had to" )

 

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Answer 2

I spent my Holidays at home. Sometimes, I went with my family to forest and we picked up blueberries. My friends and I often was sunbathing and swimming in my swimming-pool. I always helped my mother with house cleaning and I sometimes washed a car. With all my family, we organised a barbecue, then we invited our friends and we was having lots of fun! We were dancing, singing, drinking and eating. I was riding on bicycle or rollers with my friends. I also spent a little time with my cousin Natalia - who came to us for a summer. She is from Zielona Góra. My all Holidays was fantastic but time flies so quickly... and now I  have to go to school.

 

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