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Proszę o sprawdzenie mojej wypowiedzi pisemnej. Tylko najlepsze!

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One of the best film I've ever seen was the Ring. The world premiere took place second day of October two thousand and two years and the polish premiere took place fourty four days after the world premiere. The film was made in U.S and in Japan. The Ring is a horror directed by Gore Verbinski. The film tells the story of a young journalist Rachael wjo wants to discover the secrer of a mysterious video cassete. The film lasts for one hundred fifteen minutes. The main characters are Neomi Watts, Brian Cox, David Dorfman and Martin Handerson. In my opinion the plot was very interestiong and keep you interseted all the time. Delivers unforgettable impressions, especially when watching a movie when the light is switched off and no one there at home. I especially enjoyed the music which excellent composes with the plot of film and very good acting actors who fantasticially played in theirs roles. I can recomend this film to everyone whose have nerves of steel.

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One of the best film I've ever seen was the Ring. The world premiere took place on second of October 2002. (two thousand and two, ale pisze sie raczej cyframi) Polish premiere took place fourty four days after the world premiere. The film was made in U.S.A and in Japan. The Ring is a horror film directed by Gore Verbinski. The film tells the story of a young journalist Rachael who wants to discover the secret of a mysterious video cassete. The film lasts for one hundred fifteen minutes. The main characters are Neomi Watts, Brian Cox, David Dorfman and Martin Handerson. In my opinion the plot was very interesting and kept you interseted all the time. Film delivers unforgettable impressions, especially when watching it when the light is switched off and youare alone at home. I especially enjoyed the music which excellent composes with the plot of film and very good acting actors who fantastically played theirs roles. I can recomend this film to everyone whose have nerves made of steel.

 

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