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On behalf of the language course participants I am writing to express our dissatisfaction with the lack of attraction for the youth in this city. Although we will be here only a few months we would like to draw your attention to this problem and help change the city on a more friendly to young people.
Though the school offers very interesting lessons, students have nowhere to go after classes. First of all, in the city is deficit of places like shopping mall or café, where teenagers can sit and talk. We know that the construction of the new building can be very expensive, so we found another way to solve this problem. If you will make available to us building located near language school, which is currently unused, we will be able turn this place into clubroom. In this way youth will gain a place where will can go and spend free time for example watching moves.
Furthermore the big disadvantages in this town is lack of sports facilities. After classes a lot of people like to relieve negative emotions do exercises or playing sports. Unfortunately it is not possible here. A useful suggestion might be creation a special area where the cars will be have forbidden entry. By doing it youth gain a place where will be can jog or rollerbranding.
Another way to deal with lack of attraction would be to organize once a week meetings with interesting person. By doing it teenagers will be spend their free time usefully.
I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestion into consideration
Yours faithfully
On behalf of the language course participants I am writing to express our dissatisfaction with the lack of attraction for the youth in this city. Although we will be here only a few months we would like to draw your attention to this problem and help change the city on a more friendly to young people.
Though the school offers very interesting lessons, students have nowhere to go after classes. First of all, in the city is deficit of places like shopping mall or café, where teenagers can sit and talk. We know that the construction of the new building can be very expensive, so we found another way to solve this problem. If you will make available to us building located near language school, which is currently unused, we will be able turn this place into clubroom. In this way youth will gain a place where will can go and spend free time for example watching moves.
Furthermore the big disadvantages in this town is lack of sports facilities. After classes a lot of people like to relieve negative emotions do exercises or playing sports. Unfortunately it is not possible here. A useful suggestion might be creation a special area where the cars will be have forbidden entry. By doing it youth gain a place where will be can jog or rollerbranding.
Another way to deal with lack of attraction would be to organize once a week meetings with interesting person. By doing it teenagers will be spend their free time usefully.
I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestion into consideration
Yours faithfully
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