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proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów :) (mile widziane jakieś sugestie innych zdań na ten temat)

Personally, I think the best graffiti is sometimes better than “official” art. It is an art because it is a unique way to show your talents and express yourself. Graffiti allows young people to express their identity and views. As a form of decoration, where artists can share their feelings and talents. Additionally graffiti gives colour to our grey city centres, becouse it is colourful and attractive. Lot of graffiti is brilliant and imaginative, and you don’t have to pay to see it! This art is common in our city, and i think, we should tolerate graffiti on old buildings.

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Personally, I think the best graffiti is sometimes better than “official” art. It is an art because it is a unique way to show your talents and express yourself. Graffiti allows young people to express their identity and views. As a form of decoration, where artists can share their feelings and talents. Additionally graffiti gives colour to our grey city centres, becouse it is colourful and attractive. Lots of graffiti are brilliant and imaginative, and you don’t have to pay to see it! This art is common in our city, and i think, we should tolerate graffiti on the old buildings.

 

Bardzo ładna praca, nie doszukałam się innych błędów :)