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Dear Madam,

I am writing to apply for a work in a charity organization which helps homeless teenagers. My name is Maciej I am 20 years old. I like swimming, reading books and riding in a bike. I also love animals.
I graduate studies in Cracow psychologu. Last Year I worked as gardener because I like plants. I am actually working in shelter pets where I look after homeless pets.
In 2010 I worked as a men nurse in a hospital. I am hard-working, helpful, inteligent, honest, clever and friendly. I like heliping people.
I can work on Saturday and Sunday from 8 a.m. to 3 p.m. or Monday from 7 a.m. to 2 p.m. I ready to come in for an inteview.
i enclose a copy of my CV and my photo.
Yours faithlully,
XYZ

Answer 1

Dear Madam,

 

I am writing to apply for a work in a charity organization which helps homeless teenagers. My name is Maciej and I am 20 years old. I like swimming, reading books and riding in a bike. I also love animals.

I graduated psychology in Cracow. Last Year I worked as a gardener because I like plants. I am actually working in a animal shelter where I look after homeless pets. In 2010 I worked as a men nurse in a hospital.
I am hard-working and helpful. I like helping people. I am also very intelligent and clever person. Because of I always tell the truth, many people said that I am honest truthful.

I can work on Saturday and Sunday from 8 a.m. to 3 p.m. or Monday from 7 a.m. to 2 p.m. I am ready to come for an interview.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

I am enclosing a copy of my CV and my photo.

Yours faithfully,

 

XYZ