Prosiłabym aby ktoś mi sprawdził ten tekst czy nie ma błędów w stylu, niewłaściwie użytego słowka itp. i ewentualnie poprawił. To opis pokoju. Z góry dzięki :)
I haven't got my own bedroom yet. For the moment I have bedroom with two sisters. There are two sofa beds in our bedroom. On first sleep me and my sister X and on second my sister Y. There is the big cupboard on the right side. Me and X keep our school books inside. There is an aquarium with my blue fish Enio [to imię rybki jc] on the cupboard. On the left side of our bedroom is my keyboard. I play on them every day. There is a second cupboard too. Y keeps her school books there. Walls in our bedroom are white and a floor is beige. There is a green carpet on the floor. I don't like my bedroom.
Napisałaś dobrze. Bardzo mi się to podoba. Gdybym byla nauczycielką dałabym Ci 5 nawet z + . : )