Question

Potrzubuję sprawdzenia wypracowania z angielskiego o moim nsjlepszym nauczycielu. Z góry dziękuję za pomoc

My best teacher's name was Margaret. She She taught me in elementary school. She was understanding and patient. She was also demanding. She had great contact with children. She evaluated all of justly. For all was always nice. She had a sense of humor. Lessons conducted by Mrs. Margaret were always interesting. She was always helpful. She liked the lesson conducted by Mrs. Margaret, I REMEMBER THEM FOR TODAY. in the future I would like BE SUCH AS SHE TEACHER. I hope that my students will one day so I am also pleased to mention.

Answer 1

Bardzo ładne wypracowaanie, ale uważaj na błędy stylistczne np. SHE . 2 zdanie ma 2 takie slowa po sobie:She She taught me in elementary school.

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Answer 2

Ładnie oraz fajnie, ta na dole ma racje z tym she she ;P Ale ogólnie to było dobrze ... I ważna rada nie korzystaj z tłumaczów bo ja raz skorzystałam i wgl. nie na temat napisało; / dostałam 2! ;(