Question

Kto mi sprawdzi tłumaczenie ?

Musiałem przetłumaczyć tekst "Jesteś szalona" zespołu boys. Oto link do niego :http://www.tekstowo.pl/piosenka,boys,jestes_szalona.html

A to moje tłumaczenie :

Love is going away, I hearing again with your mouth.
Always true was having some sense.
Those days like a tale, beautiful like a thousand rose
You always laughed, just bye

You are crazy I tell you.
You always was her.
Are you finish at long last dream ?
You aren't an angel, I tell you.
You are crazy.

For good-bye you give me your laughter.
When you go away everything destroy.
I loved you and your madness.
You always laughed, just bye.

Answer 1

I Love goes away, I can hear from your lips again.
I always had a sense of truth.
These days like a fairy tale, beautiful like a thousand roses.
Have you ever laughed, and of honor.

REF: Are you crazy I tell you
Always it were.
You'll end up at last dream?
You're an angel, I tell you.
You're crazy.

II. At the farewell give me your smile.
If you leave everything to the storm.
I loved you and thy madness, very wrong.
Have you ever laughed, and of honor.

REF: Are you crazy I tell you ...
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