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Jennifer Lopez is actress, singer, fashion designer and dancer. She is the richest person of Latin American actress and dancers. She born in the twenty-fourth of July nineteen sixty-nine(1969) in New York. She began her career as dancer. Her first success was title role in film “Selena” in nineteen ninety-seven (1997). She was nominated to Golden Globe Award for "Best Actress – Motion Picture Musical or Comedy". Moreover she has played in twenty-three(23) films. She was nominated to seventeen(17) awards, too. She won sixteen(16) awards. Her the worst prize is Golden Raspberry Awards for the worst actress. Besides she has recorded many CDs. Her the first CD was “On the six(6)”. This CD gained triple platinum. Next CD was J.Lo. This CD gained fourfold platinum. Other CDs are “This is me…then”, “Rebirth”, “Como Ama una Mujer” and “Brave”. Jennifer Lopez has got her clothing line, perfumes and restaurants, too!
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Jennifer Lopez is actress, singer, fashion designer and dancer. She is the richest person of Latin American actress and dancers. She born in the twenty-fourth of July nineteen sixty-nine(1969) in New York. She began her career as dancer. Her first success was title role in film “Selena” in nineteen ninety-seven (1997). She was nominated to Golden Globe Award for "Best Actress – Motion Picture Musical or Comedy". Moreover she has played in twenty-three(23) films. She was nominated to seventeen(17) awards, too. She won sixteen(16) awards. Her the worst prize is Golden Raspberry Awards for the worst actress. Besides she has recorded many CDs. Her the first CD was “On the six(6)”. This CD gained triple platinum. Next CD was J.Lo. This CD gained fourfold platinum. Other CDs are “This is me…then”, “Rebirth”, “Como Ama una Mujer” and “Brave”. Jennifer Lopez has got her clothing line, perfumes and restaurants, too!
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Jennifer Lopez is AN actress, singer, fashion designer and dancer. She is the richest person of Latin American actress and dancers. She WAS born in the twenty-fourth of July nineteen sixty-nine(1969) in New York. She began her career as dancer. Her first success was title role in film “Selena” in nineteen ninety-seven (1997). She was nominated to Golden Globe Award for "Best Actress – Motion Picture Musical or Comedy". Moreover she has played in twenty-three(23) films. She was nominated to seventeen(17) awards, too. She won sixteen(16) awards. Her the worst prize is Golden Raspberry Awards for the worst actress. Besides she has recorded many CDs. Her BEZ THE first CD was “On the six(6)”. This CD gained triple platinum. Next CD was J.Lo. This CD gained fourfold platinum. Other CDs are “This is me…then”, “Rebirth”, “Como Ama una Mujer” and “Brave”. Jennifer Lopez has got her clothing line, perfumes and restaurants, too!
i pozostałe daty głównie rok także zostawić liczbami
i mi to she was nominated nie pasuje, wydaje mi sie że she was nominate, ale mogę się mylić
-wstaw przecinek ;)
"She is the richest person of Latin American, actress and dancers."
-jeśli tu chodzi o jej najgorszą nagrodę to spox, jak nie to zamień "worst" na "best"
"Her the worst prize is Golden Raspberry Awards for the worst actress."
-Nie znalazłem w słowniku takiego słowa "fourfold" - możliwe, że to to nazwa własna i pisze sie ją w ten sposób. Jednak mozliwe że pisze się ją oddzielnie
- no i "an actress" umkneło mi widocznie :)