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Alice in Wonderland – Tim Butron’s film it’s an adaptation of Lewis Carroll’s – “Alice in Wolderland” . 19 years old Alice have to married a man she doesn’t love, and she really don’t want do this. She’s running out following rabbit, then she falls down a rabbit hole into wonderland. In wonderland everything is not normal, everything is mad! She finds she has a destiny to fulfill, she must free the land from the evil Red Queen. She knows her, when alice was a child she’s dream about wonderland. We know that she’s been to Wonderland before, the other characters know it, but she doesn’t. The Mad Hatter (Johnny Depp) and his friends are certain she's the same girl who previously visited them years ago. They’re help her to slay Red Queen and bringing peace back to Wonderland.
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,,Alice in Wonderland'' – Tim Butron’s film is an adaptation of Lewis Carroll’s. 19 years old Alice has to marry a man she doesn’t love, and she really doesn’t want do this. She's running out following rabbit, then she falls down a rabbit hole into wonderland. In wonderland everything is not normal, everything is mad! She finds she has a destiny to fulfill, she must free the land from the evil Red Queen. She knows her, when alice was a child she was dreaming about wonderland. We know that she’s been to Wonderland before, the other characters know it, but she doesn’t. The Mad Hatter (Johnny Depp) and his friends are certain she's the same girl who previously visited them years ago. They’re help her to slay Red Queen and bringing peace back to Wonderland.
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