Question

Jest to opis tego co robiłam wczoraj. Sprawdzicie mi to? Tylko nie na tłumaczu, bo on źle tłumaczy. Najlepiej gdyby ktoś dobry z angielskiego mi to sprawdził. Dziękuję :)

Yesterday I woke up at six o'clock. I ate breakfast and washed my teeth. Then I went to school. I had math first, then English. I like English. Then i learned German. We have written many words. After Germany was the story, followed by a PE. We played volleyball. It was very cool. Then I went home. I ate dinner, and after that I played on the computer. After I did homework. When I finished, I went for a walk with the dog. Then I went to the store. After I ate dinner. She was good. In the evening, I was reading a magazine. After I watched TV. Then I went to bed.

Answer 1

Uważam że jest ok  ... ( a z angola mam 4i 5 )

 

Answer 2

może zamiast zdania I had math first,then English. zapisać First I had math.

z angola mialem 6.  i byłem na olimpiadzie wojewódzkiej                          LICZĘ NA NAJ