Question

I get up at 7 in the morning, turn down the bed intercede water for tea and preparing breakfast. At 8 in the morning brush my teeth, take a shower and get dressed. At 9 in the morning I go out with the dog for a walk after returning getting ready to go out for shopping. I'll be back at 11 am preparing dinner on the 13th hour After dinner, watch TV or play computer games. About 17 in the afternoon I meet up with friends for pizza or going to the movies. About 20 pm I get home I go out with the dog for a walk, eat dinner, watch tv by 22 pm I take a quick shower and go to sleep.

Jest to dobrze napisane ?? Nie wiem jak mam te godziny zmienić

Answer 1

I get up at 7 in the morning, turn down the bed, intercede water for tea and prepare m breakfast.

At 8 in the morning I brush my teeth, I take a shower and get dressed.

At 9 o'clock I go out with my dog for a walk.

Then I get ready to go shopping.

I come home about midday and I prepare the dinner for my family. We eat dinner at about 13 o'clock.

After dinner I watch TV or play computer games.

About 17 in the afternoon I meet my friend and we go to the cinema or we order a pizza.

At about 20 I come home and I take my dog for a walk.

Next, I eat dinner and watch TV to 22 oclock. Then I take a quick shower and I go to sleep.

 

Ogolnie jest dobrze zrobione, tylko jest kilka drobny bledow. Poza tym pamietaj, ze a.m. albo p.m. uzywamy tylko w czase angielskim, bo oni maja 12-godzinny system, my uzywamy 24-godzinnego wiec u nas juz sie nie uzywa am i pm. Jak cos jest nie jasne, to pisz na priv