Question

Hejka.

Ostatnio ułożyłam piosenkę po angielsku i nie wiem, czy jest całkowicie poprawna. Więc proszę, poprawcie mi błędy, stylistyczne i gramatyczne :) .

I niech się nie zabiera do tego ten, kto nie ma szóstki z anglika, bo muszę tą piosenkę zaprezentować publicznie :) .

I don't know, and please, you say it me

I feel different and I can't speak to you

I feel different, but I don't know why

Maybe cause your heart is only my

Please, you don't say me anything

Kiss my lips.

Lips to lips

I feel different that is really true

But why? Maybe cause I love you.

I try to make a very big change

I try to connect my enemys and friends

Pleas, you say me what can do I do?

I try to connect my enemys and friends

But I don't know why.

It's not really- that is only true.

But I try do it only for you.

This game is stupid I want finish it now

But I can't do it and I don't know how

I started the game, I must finish it now.

I'm doing stupid things, you understand me

Becaus I'm in love, my heart isn't free

My friends hate you, but I opposite,

you too, so you understand me.

Yeah, yeah.

Pleas, you don't speak to me,close your mouth

Look to my eyes

Put your fingers on mu hand and close my eye too

And kiss my lips, because it's only true :)

Pozdrawiam!

Najlepszy dostanie naj :) .

Answer 1

z angielskiego mam 6 i wedłóg mnie jest ok. ;>

masz telent. :D

Answer 2

w czwartej zwrotce powinno być 'because' a nie 'becaus'

w piątej zwrotce 'please' zamiast 'pleas'

w piątej zwrotce po 'look to my eyes' postaw przecinek.

jak na moje oko to reszta okeej :D,

+ fajna piosenka, gratuluję wyobraźni. ; )