Question

Dobrze po angielsku napisałam?

How are you? Yesterday I came from holiday! It was great.
I was in Międzyzdroje with my family and we arrived the train until 10 hours! It was very boring, but then I listened to music so it was better.
Later we went to a hotel. It was beautiful! It had lots of swimming pools and in our room we had a X-BOX!
In the first day we were swam in the sea. Water isn;t very cold, but hot not too. We bought many pretty souvenirs.
In the second day weather was sunny, so we visited city. Iw was very big. We met Wojciecha Cejrowskiego, and he gave us an autograph. He was very nice, but he had a shoes!
In the last day the weather was cloudy and rainy, so we didn't leave our hotel. We watched TV and we played on the X-BOX.
My holiday was great and I want it more!
And what was your holiday?

Greetings,
Paulina :)


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Answer 1

W drugiej linijce chyba chodzi Ci o to, że jechaliście 10 godzin, więc napisałabym raczej  and we traveled by a train for 10 hours. (chyba, że chodzi Ci o coś innego ale musiałabyś wytłumaczyć wtedy,bo nie rozumiem)

Napisałabym I decided to listen to  music so it got better

an X-BOX 

At the first day we went to swim at the sea. 

Water isn't very cold, but not hot too. 

we vistited the city 

At the last day it was cloudy and rainy...

My holidays were great and I want more!

And how was your holidays?