Czy to wypracowanie jest dobre? Wskażcie mi błędy, jeśli takowe są.
My holiday
This holiday I was in Turkey, in Bodrum. It was teally cool.
I spend my "turkish" holiday with my my family: my mum, my dad and my sister, Ola. We were in hotel called Ayaz Aqua. There was a big swimming pool shaped as lazy river. We swam ther almost everyday. On the other days we arrived on many trips: Pammukale, Daylan, Efes, Blue Sail, Turkish Bath.
It was really cool. Weather was really good - it was sunny and hot everyday - no rain or something. I like my "turkish" holiday very much - people were really nice and funny. I spend nice two weeks with my family. I'm happy of my holiday.
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Jeżeli jest to wypracowanie do gimnazjum, to jest na poziomie dobrym. Brak rzucających się w oczy błędów, lecz zwracaj też uwagę na interpunkcję (kropki, przecinki itp.).
Pozdrawiam :)
1- zamieniłbym teally na realy
2-my powtarza się 2 razy w 2 wersie
reszta brzmi okej
bardzo fajnie spedziłaś wakację
licze na naj :D