Question

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Dear Holly.
I'm soryy I didn't write anything long but I didn't have time. I have a lot tests at school. How are you ? Are you in relationship with Zack right now ?
In my school was art contest last month. I won it !Together with my class I go on rink because now is winter. This is great !
Yesterday my aunt arrived to me of New York. She has a son - Joe. My aunt bought for me a lot gifts. My sister started to study three months ago and she is learning well now. My Mom and Dad are greeting you now.
What's up in your family ? Your grandmother is healthy ? What is happening in your school ?
Greeting to the your parents and grandmother than me.
Write Holly, I miss you.
Kisses,
XYZ

Answer 1

Dear Holly. 
I'm soryy I didn't write anything long but I didn't have time. I have a lot tests at school. How are you ? Are you in relationship with Zack right now ? 
In my school was art contest last month. I won it !Together with my class I go on rink because now is winter. This is great ! 
Yesterday my aunt arrived to me of New York. She has a son - Joe. My aunt bought for me a lot gifts. My sister started to study three months ago and she is learning now well. My Mom and Dad are greeting you now. 
What's up in your family ? Your grandmother is healthy ? What is happening in your school ? 
Greeting to the your parents and grandmother than me. 

Write Holly, I miss you. 
Kisses, 

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Answer 2

My aunt bought me a lot of gifts

Is your grandmother healthy?

Greeting your parents and grandmother from me.