Question

Chciałabym żeby ktoś to sprawdził i poprawił błędy. za pomoz dziekuje ;P

Dear Magda

I would like to tell you about my vacation.
I was in the mountain and my aunt. When I wasin the mountain the sun shine. First day I was at the dam and in castle. The next day I went to the owl mountain. Then I went to the line park and sledge. It was amazing. Leter I was in the groove. In the groove i`m swiming boat.
When I was at my aunt I fed fish in the pond. Next day I went to the museum. Then I played with my cousin. Leter I went to the cinema.
Write to me as soon as possible. I miss you and cant wait to see you again.

Kiss,
Asia.

Answer 1

Dear Magda,

I’d like to tell you about my vacation.
I was in the mountains and then visited my aunt. When I was in the mountains the weather was great. The sun was shining all the time. During the first day I was at the dam and in castle. The next day I went to the owl mountain.　Then I went to the line park and sledge.　It was amazing.　Later I was in the groove.　In the groove I was swimming in the boat.
When I was at my aunt’s place I fed fish in the pond.　Next day I went to the museum.　Then I played with my cousin.　Leter I went to the cinema.
Write to me as soon as possible.　I miss you and can’t wait to see you again.

Kisses,
Asia.