Bardzo prosdzę o sprawdzenie mojego opowiadania po angielsku, szczególnie błedów. Dzieki!
My lastholiday startedquiteboring.One day I and my friendsdecided togo on holidayto Spain.We hadlittle timeto packupbecause we hada planefortwo hours,and it was aspontaneoustrip.When we landed,we went to thecampsitefortheaccommodation.Unfortunately, it turned outthat there is veryexpensive,and wecould not affordfot them.We thought wepitched our tenton the beach.It was great,we learneda lot of newpeople.We danced,we wentto parties andadmiringthe beautiful sunsets.It was a littlecold,but it wasspontaneous andit was the best.We slepton the sand, we playedfootball andbathedin the sea at4am.It was oneof the best holidaysof my life.Spontaneousunforgettablevacation:)
nie wiem co chciałaśna pisaćw tym zdaniu: and we could not afford fot? alebo for?
a reszta jest dobra
Popraw:
- we had a plane IN two hours
- coulnd't afford FOR IT
- we met a lot of new people
- admired the beautiful sunsets
Tyle co zauważyłam.