Question

Alguien me puede decir si esta bien redactado esto por me urge pero que de verdad diga si esta bien

Todas: Hello
Danny: How did it go? How was the trip?
Mary: I had a good time
Caro: It was impressive
Jeymy: I think there's a lot to tell. Let's have coffee.
Danny: Yes of course
Mary: It's okay

Danny: And where did they travel?
Mary: I went to Miami
Caro: I to Switzerland
Jeymy: I visited Japan
Mary: And where did you go, Danny?
Danny: To Italy
Caro: And how was the girls' week? They had fun
Jeymy: It was beautiful. Arriving on Monday and the weather was perfect, the weather was warm and there were lots of flowers, it looked like spring
Mary: I arrive on Friday morning, visit the beach, saw the sunset and on Saturday went shopping. The weather in Miami is very hot and sunny in the two days I did not see a rain sign and everything was clear
Danny: Italy is beautiful. The weather was a bit cold and there were dry leaves all over the place. I arrived on Tuesday and visited all the places I could
Mary: How was your travel Carolina
Caro: Fantastic! A very cold but pleasant climate. Wednesday and Thursday were very cold and a little snow fell so I took my coat and went out to enjoy the snowflakes
Jeymy: We definitely had a great time on our vacation
Danny:I want to come back!
Mary: Clear! But now we have to go back to work
Caro: It is true
Jeymy : I have to go girls, I have many things to do
Danny: We think so too!
Mary: I loved to see them
Caro: I also
Danny: See you

Answer 1

Let's have a coffee está mejor dicho. Where did you travel.