Question

Mr Smith and Mrs Smith to went by car. It was evening. Then they decided to stayed a hotel. Mr Smith watched TV in the evening and Mrs readed a book in the evening. They went on the bed at eleven o'clock. Mrs Smith woke up at seven o'clock. She looked but ... her husband wasn't in the bed. She dressed and she left hotel. The car stood before hotel but Mr Smith disappeared. Where was he? Nobody knows.

Musiałam ułożyć historykę na podstawie obrazków (Connections 1, zadanie 4/61) , ale nie jestem pewna , czy wszystkie zdania mają poprawną budowę itp.
Może ktoś sprawdzić ? :) Daję naj ;

Answer 1

Tak  Teraz dobrze jest było kilka błęduw ale tu jest wszystko poprawione :

Mr. Smith and Mrs. Smith went to the car. It was evening. Then I decided to stay at the hotel. Mr. Smith watched television in the evening and the lady was readinga book in the evenings. They went to bed at eleven o'clock. Mrs Smith woke up at seven. She looked up, but ... her husband was not in bed. She dressed and left the hotel. The car stood in front of the hotel, but Mr. Smith disappeared